Dirty Angel [Original Poetry]

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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Dirty Angel

I'd like to pray
to them
and never ask
Why have you forsaken me?
They're my peace
of this world
where dreams
are the stuff of life
and everything else
is just details
You can be my dirty angel
and I'll shower you
in substances, slang, and euphemism
just until everything is
ok again
Until there's nothing dark
only a weakness for
smiles
and
pleasant philosophy
everyone understands just what
You're saying
even when you're not too sure
Yeah they understand that too.

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How beautiful the art is and thought provoking poetry!

Thank you, lovely!

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This one amazed me. "Until there's nothing dark only a weakness for smiles"
Beautiful poetry. Thanks for the post
Saludos!

Thank you for the comment! I was trying to write about the escapism that drug users tend to seek.

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I am looking forward to that shower.

great poem

even though I am not too sure what you were saying at the end

lol

I bet you were lol!

angels are just messengers
jah god is the one!

I really enjoyed this introspective piece. I perceived it as being very honest. Good write.

#resteembotsentme

Thank you! I used Deep dream generator to create the image

So beautiful! Thabks for sharing!

Lucas Malabarize-se

If the devil is in the details the dirty angel is in the dreams. I like the way the image works with the poem, it took my imagination of the dirty angel in another direction - if you know what I am saying (I am not too sure)

I see what you did there ;)

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