"The Other Day" [ A Poem of Youthful Experience // 1-27-1992 \\ ]

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The Other Day



Yeah, the other day,
known as Friday,
My Friends
and
I
went for a ride
on the freeways
of L.A.



The Lights were
speeding,
going through our
skin!

We spun in
Circles,
and when we
stopped,
the sky kept going,
continued spinning,
and then we ran,
it felt like a war,
but it wasn't,
it was all in our head.





The Moon was glowing,

the clouds were electric,

just like our sunrise,

extremely red.

Finally we felt the power

of the unconscious call

into the realm of dreams

and

so we slept.



01/27/1992

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