An Ode to Slack - Original Haiku by @complexringsteemed (64)in #poetry • 8 years ago I don't believe what I'm reading. Things keep changing all the time near me.
Inspired by the simplicity of these words... Here is one --
As times stillness remains quiet.
Things change wile I sleep
to wake again.
Gotcha, it was my first one...
I think you need to remove the still in the second line after things. Then, it's a proper Haiku. I anticipate the edit and have already upvoted. ;)
i always maintain that technology takes control of the world over population... as years keep coming, technology is positively responding to ease man's problem...
Sitting on the couch
Smoking a bowl on steemit
Curation is good
The moon shines brightly
Tugging gently at the tide
While we soundly sleep
I do not believe what I am reading.
Things keep changing.
All the time.
C'est terriblement reel car j'ai fait la meme remarque.
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... JOKE! I did enjoy your poem.
Like Medici
Gild dust rains
Double-edged sword
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;) My first. Does it work? J.