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Struck
in the house of betrayal,
a years,
l o n g awaited kiss.
Slowly,
we would thaw in one.
The time guard
must have rung his gong.
Bright spathe
had stargazed our eyes,
and our lips
have met this morning.
The rays did make us understand,
that this absurd,
forbidden play
been struck by broken arrows.
And by all
the wingless angels,
was for eternity
to last.
So this enchantment
shall not rapture.
No matter when
and what is lost!
And so,
the silver fairies
had rustled
pleasure to your ears.
So this devotion
is to set example,
to all the loves
that lay ahead…
After reading "we would thaw in one" I need an icecream now :P
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What a wonderful poem it's so beautiful.
Glad you like it!
You can make a movie on how good you are on writing, or at least a book! You are incredible.
Wow thanks, very flattering!
Great poem guys thank you
Romantik poem!
it's beautiful @serejandmyself calls for longing
Thanks!
What is your explanation of this poem @serejandmyself? I'm wondering what you meant by "in the house of betrayal."
I think id rather you have your own image )))
Wonderful, accents of Shakespeare . I like it!
Awaiting my quiz ;)
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After reading this poem, I really miss my ex-girlfriend :(
Very nice poem.