You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: [Poetry] - War of ConfusionView the full contextsarah2014blue (32)in #poetry • 5 years ago Hello, would you like some feedback?
@sarah2014blue I'm so sorry for the late reply.
I'll love to get a feedback.
Thank you 😊
My feedback is try and write without rhyme. What sometimes happens when we try to rhyme, is that we focus on rhyming and we forget the purpose of the poem, which is it to carry meaning.
Posted using Partiko iOS
I am so happy, finally, I get criticized constructively.
Thank you so much for the feedback, I'll surely give a thorough consideration to what you've suggested
You’re very welcome!
Posted using Partiko iOS