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RE: Why Marry? (Day One)

in #poetry7 years ago

Look i am back after days and yes, i am huge admirer of your wonderful selection of words @yahialababidi ;)

This is one of the most influential english poem i came across as it discusses the process of marriage in a ery deep way. Yes, marriage makes two bodies a single soul <3

We marry because to know someone this way
is to expand our souls and touch life's core,
just as to contemplate Forever in any form
is to contemplate Forever in every form.

Loved to hear that you and your wife are enjoying this wonderful relation for 10 years , Bravo <3

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Hello, again, Salman :) You said something I forgot to mention in my poem, how 2 bodies can be a single soul. I hint at this with the lines: We marry because we are already married/
in invisible ink, that our vows spell out—

Thank you, for your affirmation and warm words re: my own marriage (it's work, my friend, just like everything else that matters, but well worth it) <3

You are an ocean of vocabulary and have firm grip on the language and i learnt many things from your poem and thanks to you indeed for putting such a wonderful piece of art my spiritual brother <3

Thanks, for supporting my work. Good to know it's of help to you and wish you best of luck with yours.

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