Always always awesome. Your soul is pured in your diction and then make this poem very beautiful and meaningful. i comment with this
hen the dew drops leaves leaves teary
hit by the morning sun rays the colors of the rainbow
radiating beauty as your smile wakes me up at dawn
whisper mesramu invites me to navigate the ocean of love splitting the waves filled with foam of romance

when I see the star flicker last night I remember your eyebrows are soothing
like a drop of water in the Sahara desert for a traveler
want to drink but worried out and can not enjoy it again

when we talk ordinary things will be so beautiful
because in the setiao words there is intimacy that is not obtained in others
there is love that is not given by all the time
no sense of smell left for a moment

because you are my soul mate
because you're half my life
if I separate from you then half of you
if you leave then half you save for me
even so I save half your life and your soul

warm regard from indonesia