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RE: SWEPT AWAY - The divine Feminine inspiring the divine Masculine to action (Original Poem)

in #poetry8 years ago

Hola freeinthought! I was caught by the title of your poem and subject matter of your original poesy. I am inclined to wax literary in commentary, hoc modo:

Passion sweeping away fear,
An enticing concept my dear;
as to which way to to so steer!

Through the storms and waves,
passion is how life lived behaves;
forbidden knowledge in those caves!

hidden in the walls of nature's feminine fruit,
the masculinity, the protective, the power loot!
O' that sweet dichotomy is at times a hilarious hoot.

The mortal coil is a rascal rebel,
to the music: turn up the treble
and damages to them: lovely level!

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Wow. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading your extension to my poem. Bravo.

My pleasure; glad you enjoyed my dovetailing it. And keep up the excellent compositions.

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