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RE: THE FARM ~ A (sorta) Metaphysical Poem
Great poem @rasamuel. I love the subtext.
One day the farmer shall wake,
and watch
as his distant soul, finally,
seizes its illusion of life and flight.
I particularly like the way it concludes. This follows up the imagery and ideas from the previous verse quite well. Nice work :-)
Thanks raj. Feels good coming from a fellow poet.