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RE: THE FARM ~ A (sorta) Metaphysical Poem

in #poetry7 years ago

Great poem @rasamuel. I love the subtext.

One day the farmer shall wake,
and watch
as his distant soul, finally,
seizes its illusion of life and flight.

I particularly like the way it concludes. This follows up the imagery and ideas from the previous verse quite well. Nice work :-)

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Thanks raj. Feels good coming from a fellow poet.

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