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RE: Just be, in love (poetry)
Thank you beautiful! I have been very concerned about a nice flow in my lyrics as I'm a rapper. But now that I'm into slampoetry as well the staccato flow is so entertaining. Breaks up the pattern and makes you go "oh". Love it!
Absolutely!
The rhythm of the ocean lulls until the crash and angry futility of the shore break. I salute your courage in self expression, words are everything and nothing...