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RE: Bound trees

in #poetry6 years ago

@d-pend,

A planned exclusion of limbs and legions,
sorts, assortments: gems and sequins.

That's as beautiful as two lines of poetry ever get. Predictably, I love that particular alliteration in the first line. :-) But I also love what you did with "sorts, assortments" ... does that have a name ... where you find one word inside of another? I can't recall that it does, but it seems like it ought. That's a good technique ... stealing.

Overall assessment: Dan, you're not a city-slicker. You were most definitely meant to live on a farm. :-)

Good write.

Quill

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