The End of Something Started (Original)
I am the prayer before the sin
I am the old tree gone no further
I am the end before it begins
These days I'm much less 'bold' than 'soldier'
My truths are stamped upon my tins
I am the music playing backwards
rushing back to where it begins
Taste the tea leaves of the future
and drink it deep so I don't forget
Here's to the start of something finished -
to you and me when we next begin.
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It is a wonderful poem, full of feelings
Thanks for your observation, writing is useless without those to interpret :)
Your words fly on the wings of music, poetry touches the angel's wings, it's all the beginning - everything starts from the end @prufarchy
And yet at these ends, when we recount our beginnings, we find there's life yet unexamined - all this starts again @dobartim
Exellent words @prufarchy
The lament of the unbroken rebirths, my friend @dobartim
You're an incredible rhetorician @prufarchy
Beautiful!
Thank you, intrepid human :) Here's the first part to it, written a while ago but I link cause I think you'd enjoy:
The Start of Something Finished
Yes, I remember this. :)
very informative post.every moment i learn something from your post.love to read it.
I loved this in the Discord chat, and immediately came here to validate it.
Love the "I am" assertiveness. Love the looping, the cycles... Love the hopefulness...
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