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RE: Closure ( original poetry and artwork)
I feel the tears burn in my flesh.
Like a river, they flow from my eyes.
These lines expressed your pain quite well. I love how you had a repeating line (seems to be a common theme this week) and in the end, it changed. The change makes the last line feel that much more empowering since it broke the cycle.
Thank you ever so kindly!
Yes, I have seen it a lot this week!
I think I use it a lot in my poetry, kinda a thing a Like to do!
And then flip at the end just because thats cool! :D
Thank you for your reply!
xxx
Snekky