This was an amazing piece! Today I was doing the poetsunited round-up, and this was my favourite piece! Even the way you structured it gives an added layer to the words.

wrong side of heaven
or righteous
depth of
hell?

I love the way the words collapse. These lines were definitely my favourite. Genius lines.

The first stanza also engages the reader so well - I was interested and was looking forward to reading it all with FULL interest. Great job!