I actually enjoyed this so much. Sometimes, less is more, and this is definitely one of those cases.

In fact, I have chosen this to be one of my favourites and featured it in the first-ever "The Best Poems of the Week" - exclusive for the poems tagged with #poetsunited.

Read more about it here: https://steemit.com/curation/@poetrybyjeremy/the-best-poems-of-the-week-1st-edition-steemit-poets-united