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RE: Poetry: Rat Moves - This Weeks Antics
All I am thinking is how cute the rats are if they are like the pictures!
Jokes aside, it was a great poem. Especially in the middle part, the flow was excellent and the rhymes felt more natural. It was fun to read!
Thank you for coming to visit and I appreciate your comment - I agree the middle has good flow - it's easy to read out loud without thinking about it. I'm glad you liked it :)