Spoken Word Poem #3 - You Do Not Love Me

in #poetry8 years ago (edited)


In this video, I recite the poem You Do Not Love Me which I wrote earlier this week. This poem speaks about giving love in a relationship, but not receiving it back.

This video is the third instalment of my weekly series "Spoken Word Poem". As I am still a beginner in both Spoken Poetry and Video Editing, I would appreciate any constructive feedback that you may have.


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Hey! I would edit this to include the text version of your poem as well- not everyone likes to listen, and sometimes dtube doesn't work well.

yeah, thank you for the feedback. The issue is that I post my poems in text form, and then depending on how they do, I choose the best of the week and recite it. That way, if I post the text, it could become copied content, so instead, I tried to hyperlink it when I name it. That way, I avoid copying and having two posts with too much similar content.

I'm new to Steemit, but I want to avoid any trouble and flags lol

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