Alive yet Dead
Alive yet Dead
Today..
It's almost a month
No news, no stories
Promises fly away in the air
No problem..
But I think there is something awkward
You're Venus, I'm Mars
Always be matched
Are you still alive?
The bottom of my heart wisphered
Stalking your blog
I see you're still hanging around there
The affection is tireless
I hand over everything to God
To handle my problems
And to defend our unbalanced heart
This is me!
I still wanna fight
For us, for love
Let me be an arrogant girl
Just the promises from you
You.. Who is still alive or not
For this faded feeling
I won't be crying, for this time, just this time
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Sad yet relatable... :/ Sometimes you love someone and they promise to stay, but then they let go and it hurts a lot. Nicely communicated through the poem. "The affection is tireless". Nicely put. Expresses exactly the feeling you get. It's hard to know when to give up and when to keep fighting. But your feelings kinda push you to carry on.
Omg I have read your comment. Thanks before for comment my post. Yes, this part is the difficult thing I think in every love story.
You can imagine if you are the one who feel that and you must survive for your lobe and your life.
This's hard, I know. Everyone knows, especially people who have felt this before, but as human who have a basic that is have a holy heart, we have to understanding it and choose the best choice for our future 😊
Yes, I agree. :)
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