Nice post I like how the number of syllables in each line gives it rhythm and makes it feel like a song. I guess that is what makes a good poet, when it becomes about more than just having the last word rhyme. And then the metaphors and stuff also obviously play a big role.
thanks, @pjcswart - it's like any other art I suppose - there's a certain technical aspect to it but ultimately you're trying to touch your reader
Makes sense I guess. Thanks for connecting on here. I hope you have a WONDERFUL day!! 😝 😛