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RE: A secret

in #poetry6 years ago

She just said that one day I too
Will be given this super-power,
When find out that now we're two,
There is no lonely desert flower.

I love the last stanza, how the mother replied sweetly without making her daughter confused. Felt the Mother-Daughter bond... nice piece! 😊

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Thank you, Pingcess, I really appreciate you checking out my writing )

Havent had my rounds yet.. im really squeezed this week til sunday at least... missed the class too.. huhuhu... will try to catch up soon!! See you around!! 💕

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