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RE: [POEM] --> Pictures of Resting Souls
We can't see through the things clearly just because we are judgmental.Is it what you wanted to say?
Writing poems are hard.I try to represent a theme but it fails to get reader's attention.I never tried to write poem until yesterday.I posted it and found that it was an epic failure.
@philipkavan
Poems conveying ideas or themes take some time to get used to, but don't give up.
As for "can't see through the things clearly just because we are judgmental" is not quite what this poem is
communicating. It's more... we can't see through things because we lack care IN judgement of what we see / are presented with.