Eyes Wide Open (original poetry)
Eyes Wide Open
with my eyes
fully open
waiting for an age
when unspoken words
are spoken
and the weakness
of man
the sands of time
slowly slip
through my hand
like the vestiges
of dreams
dancing through life
on a
multiplicity of streams
within
fractals of time
the wisdom of the cosmos
slowly birthed
into rhyme
Feel free to take a look at some of my other poetry:
1)https://steemit.com/poetry/@perceptualflaws/words-of-thanks-and-a-poem-to-followers-old-and-new
2)https://steemit.com/poetry/@perceptualflaws/the-winds-of-change-original-poetry
3)https://steemit.com/poetry/@perceptualflaws/the-wars-of-perception-original-poem
4)https://steemit.com/poetry/@perceptualflaws/society-an-original-poem
5)https://steemit.com/poetry/@perceptualflaws/cycle-of-life-original-poetry-and-pictures
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Top notch words as ever my man.
Thanks for the comment my friend, as always it's greatly appreciated.
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Oh this is superb. Philosophy perfectly whirled into poetry. Brilliant rhymes, deep meaningful words. Finding you made my day. I was looking for someone who does the same that I do. Found nobody until now who could turn philosophies into poetry. I thought I was alone here. So glad to read this poem. Upvoted and followed. Looking forward for more intriguing and mysterious poetries. :) :) Have a look at my poetries as well. I too write esoteric stuff.
@himshweta Thanks for your kind words my friend, It's greatly appreciated. Really interested in reading some of your poetry, I'm in and out all day today but will be sure to sit down at some point in the next couple of days and take a look at your work. I included some of my other poems at the bottom of this post so please feel free to take a look. We certainly seem to be on the same wavelength so I have added you to my follow list and again thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Sure, letme have a look at other links of yours. Thanks for the follow :) I am sure we are gonna learn a lot from from each other :)
Here are a few, I'm just on my way out but will be sure to check out your work once I'm back :)
1)https://steemit.com/poetry/@perceptualflaws/words-of-thanks-and-a-poem-to-followers-old-and-new
2)https://steemit.com/poetry/@perceptualflaws/the-winds-of-change-original-poetry
3)https://steemit.com/poetry/@perceptualflaws/the-wars-of-perception-original-poem
4)https://steemit.com/poetry/@perceptualflaws/society-an-original-poem
5)https://steemit.com/poetry/@perceptualflaws/cycle-of-life-original-poetry-and-pictures
6)https://steemit.com/poetry/@perceptualflaws/the-flaws-of-perception-original-poetry
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Nice poem...
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, it's much appreciated.
You're welcome
UPVOTED.
very good.
I would be happy if you like to follow me and give your opinion about my posts.
Thanks.
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, it's much appreciated. I have followed you, I'm in and out all day but will find some time to sit down and check out your post in the next couple of days. Again thanks for the comment.
so thanks for comment my frind