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RE: The Untouchables (Poetry)

in #poetry6 years ago

I think Trump should give you all his money for writing the best biography. :)

Well written, I see why it took you hours to finalise, I like how you identified most of the types and to make it into avatar that is brilliant, the news should use this to identify the groups they speak about.

in Todays someone from the fire nation caused an innocent man to be locked up after he tried to protect his child from a water assasin , if allowed to proceed we know the water assasin could have had his way and no judge would touch them.

This world truly is a pathetic one, as can be clearly read in your poem.

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This is one of those comments that make me happy yet sad, for obvious reasons.

I am glad that you are able to see the effort I put behind this. It's interesting how authors tend to give the victims superpowers and they emerge victorious and dubbed as heroes, whereas in reality it tends to be the complete opposite.

I think a parallel world to Avatar could be an interesting concept for a series or a longer story. I will have to think about it actually. It applies to the real world so easily, as you portrayed, that I might try to evolve it, and restructure it a little.

The world may be pathetic at large, but there are still some good people lying around. Who knows, maybe their superpower is to slowly convince people and manage to turn the world good.

In most cases it is those good people knowingly or unknowingly either helping to move the mountains by building the sky scrapers, allowing the courts do make such rulings or not pushing that rulings get made in the first place, but good people do what they need to provide to a good family and help where they can.

We all play our role and no matter at what echelon you are in this world you can be sure that you are at the front line in relation to those above you.

Yeah, survival is the priority, and there is no bad in that. There are few good ones who are comfortable enough to sacrifice their lives for a good cause. Or they are comfortable and privileged enough to risk losing some stuff. I will remain hopeful :3

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