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in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Everyone is lonely,
lonely for attention,
lonely for recognition,
hungry for praise,
wanting to be seen as the better one,
the better off,
wanting to be envied,
everyone's wearing a mask
to hide
the fucked up kid inside
who enjoys dancing to the music
of this meat parade.

By Pastilan

I wrote this poem on November 16, 2014, I was tired of Facebook that time.

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Awesome.... You have perfectly expressed my thoughts on Facebook. I hate using Facebook. I stopped using it years ago. I still have a FB account only for find great deals in the area through FB Market place. Other than that there is no usability of FB in my life. Plus FB is a time waste , and I feel Face Book has some sort of negative energy that inflicts its users.
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nice poetry follow back me

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