TODAY POETRY Thanks For Remembering UssteemCreated with Sketch.

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Thanks For Remembering Us
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The flowers sent here by mistake,
signed with a name that no one knew,
are turning bad. What shall we do?
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Our neighbor says they're not for her,
and no one has a birthday near.
We should thank someone for the blunder.
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Is one of us having an affair?
At first we laugh, and then we wonder.
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The iris was the first to die,
enshrouded in its sickly-sweet
and lingering perfume. The roses
fell one petal at a time,
and now the ferns are turning dry.
The room smells like a funeral,
but there they sit, too much at home,
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accusing us of some small crime,
like love forgotten, and we can't
throw out a gift we've never owned

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Nice.However you could have thrown out the flowers right away.

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I loved the poem, but I would advice you to post your poems without those pictures in the middle, because somehow it breaks the sequence when people are reading it. Just an advice (:
I posted some writings too, check it out.

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