"the-sad-young-man-poetry "100day Steemit School Poetry challenge. Day1. (Poetry)

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

I tell you the story of that young man


Who is young from grief and is small


The poor knows neither joy nor


Happiness as if it is not worthy of them


He tells his story and his tears boil


Silent as someone who has money and is poor


He regrets his heart and says to him


 I had my own cloth for all your silk


Forgive me, my heart, for what has afflicted you


Instead of silk I gave you only tin


All my life is miserable and what is in it


A beautiful thing except that it was short


Of the great despair of life has become


 Always pray to Almighty God


He said no one understands me but


I know that you alone are being sacked


He dreamed of a joyful life


 And life that has no counterpart


But he found only sorrow and misery


His whole life was a coma on a bed


What did he do to make all this happen?


 Distinction between inhalation and exhalation


That smart guy was called crazy


As if he were living in a herd of donkeys


Call the crazy fool and the animal and


 These qualities are sown a lot more


This poor man was not his fault except that


He loved to be more reflective




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I enjoyed reading this.. I had to go over it a couple of times to soak it in. A sad tale indeed it is!

Keep up the great work and good luck with the contest :)

With Love
Hart Floe Poet
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Ooops! Meant to say PS - The contest specified using two images in each post @nationall - just as a reminder! :)

With Love
Hart Floe Poet
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Thank you
and welcome
I will check out your blog

Thanks man, I hope you like what you find there... plenty more coming so watch this space!

Keep up the great work.

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Hart Floe Poet
<3

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Nice piece.

thnx welcome

It's a sad beautiful piece, I hear the soul in it...

thnx and welcome

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