Schizophrenia (Poetry)
The night is tedious ..
From a strange time
In the Hughes bays
The muscle is taut
He took me by his tiredness
Lights are turned off
The head had ignited Chiba
The language of Braille has become ...
I see things touch
Nearby strangers
They were relatives yesterday
Familiar tones of their voices
It is between us Rabat
There is a terrible silence
Then nonsense ..
Random shots
Blood sheds time
From the time of wasting the blood of the grandfather
I'm tired of sleeping
Insomnia will hold me back
All drugs exhausted
And my veins are still beating
The latest spiritual ...
And I am between creation
I became halves
All nudes are not split ...
I miss for those around me
And we go in love with illusion
I extended my hand
Without i know
We isolation and light
I passed my answer randomly
Turn pages ...
The far reaches of the earth
Without bothering
I was in the bedroom
I love this! You have some great lines here. That first line is awesome.
The night is tedious
Yikes! It makes me think of all the ways a night can be tedious, and I like the image of it, the sound of it, the feel of it. And the best part is, the rest of the poem does that line a great justice. Some awesome lines throughout:
He took me by his tiredness
Blood sheds time
my veins are still beating
I am between creation
I became halves - love this one!
All nudes are not split - this one too :-)
And we go in love with illusion Brilliant!
These lines all work together to produce an effect that is mesmerizing. Awesome poem. You nailed it.
The poem is quite disorienting for me - a bit like a sensory overload, bleeding as such overload does, into an illusion (in the psychological definition of the word). The title for me, gives this interpretation more grounds.. but I could be off the mark. - Agreed, it is a brilliant piece indeed!
Absolutely. The title does interpret the text and make me wonder. Of course, I am forced to think about the words in light of that title. That's another layer.
I respect your opinion
Is a poem expressing the schizophrenia of some of the disorder on the thinking and feelings and and mental illusions and lack of coherence of speech
In real life
Show, very well written, quite a strong sense of realness written into being - I appreciate your sharing!
Hey man you have to be inspiration for all the new poets ... I have seen huge development in your poetry ... I love what you did there too.. Thank you for being part of our lovely community. God Bless. Peace and Love.
Thank you for your wonderful support
Happy to be with you ♥ =)
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