Very nice one @famouzqueen. The one that first caught my attention was the Full Moon.

One night as Dick lay half asleep,
Into his drowsy eyes
A great still light began to creep
From out the silent skies.

I think your words are like paint and you really know how to use this paint brush to draw a perfect picture that even the blind can see.

I also had fun reading the last poem. The way you mentioned the elements of the earth and how busy they were in a rhyme scheme got me smiling.

'I am busy ; said the air,
' Blowing here and blowing there,
Up and down and everywhere.
I am busy; said the air.

I love the air. Its blowing everywhere almost like the biblical reference of the Devil. Lolx.

Keep it up! You are a good poet. I also think you should busy yourself by entering a lot of poetry competitions. You will win alot. Cheers dear!

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