RE: (Full Moon, The night will always never stay, Day.) It's poetry night with famouzqueen
Very nice one @famouzqueen. The one that first caught my attention was the Full Moon.
One night as Dick lay half asleep,
Into his drowsy eyes
A great still light began to creep
From out the silent skies.
I think your words are like paint and you really know how to use this paint brush to draw a perfect picture that even the blind can see.
I also had fun reading the last poem. The way you mentioned the elements of the earth and how busy they were in a rhyme scheme got me smiling.
'I am busy ; said the air,
' Blowing here and blowing there,
Up and down and everywhere.
I am busy; said the air.
I love the air. Its blowing everywhere almost like the biblical reference of the Devil. Lolx.
Keep it up! You are a good poet. I also think you should busy yourself by entering a lot of poetry competitions. You will win alot. Cheers dear!
thank's for always stoping by @nairadaddy ...i appreciate