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RE: 30 DAY HAIKU CHALLENGE DAY 24 - Themadrunnah's reflection / An original poem

in #poetry4 years ago

That's a great haiku with a lot of content in those 17 syllables. This challenge sounds interesting. I might have to start playing along. For now, I'll respond to yours with one I wrote a while ago called "Progress"

Civilization
re-animalization
annihilation

Great write.

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oh moe, I love how you manage to keep the Japanese style strong even with the English 5-7-5!

Thanks for swinging by!