I loved the format. The objectivity of the first stanzas made for great contrast as the more emotional lines started coming in. Nice write.
I loved the format. The objectivity of the first stanzas made for great contrast as the more emotional lines started coming in. Nice write.
Thank you! I liked the structure and found it quite challenging it to construct in such way; especially for the more emotional sentences to fit in neatly. Again, thank you for the comment :)
No problem. One of my favorite poems of all times was a definition poem (that's what i call these) titled "The Black Widow". I wish i could find the author. Anyway, i have tried my hand at this a couple of times, but you did a great job with it here.
Oh, I'm glad you think so. Yeah, the definition or number lists tend to be more common in the spoken word poetry I suppose. I think this is my first time doing it, and it has some unique strength to it.
Here is one I did a while ago. It is about premature ventricular contractions.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@moeknows/pvc-original-poem