I liked how you used the differing rhyme scheme or the abandonment thereof. I felt it aided in the separation metaphor. Good write.
I liked how you used the differing rhyme scheme or the abandonment thereof. I felt it aided in the separation metaphor. Good write.
Thank you so much. I tried to make it seem like the structure of the poem is falling apart there in the last stanza but to still keep some kind of structure. Honestly, I am not experienced writer, I just picture something in my head and I try to describe it. Also, English is not my first language but I'm continuously trying to expand my vocabulary.
Thank you for your feedback, I hope you enjoy my future poems as well :D