I really love the ending of this. You chose a great picture to go along with this piece, because it was like a dance all the way though with final line serving as the proverbial finishing sequence that brings the audience from their seats. Great write.
Thank you!
When I thought what sort of image would go with this poem, I just knew it had to be a ballerina. I wanted one leaning down while sitting on the ground, but this one was just better than all the other options.
And yes, if I have a "skill", it's an impactful final line. Alongside with a good first page. Sadly, those skills do not add up to what one needs to write a book, namely, the middle :D