I really like how you were able to slightly change the meaning of the title line throughout the poem. It keeps us readers on our toes. Good write.
I really like how you were able to slightly change the meaning of the title line throughout the poem. It keeps us readers on our toes. Good write.
Not just the title line, but most lines repeat!
Though yes, the title-line in particular was the nucleus of the piece. Glad you liked it :)