Whoa! I was really blown away, great work. For some reason I had trouble with the first paragraph but I'm not exactly sure why. I think it might have been the 4th line because you break up being happy and that the drunk you is who you want to be with "I know drunk me is bad for me."

This was really strong, congrats and keep up the great work. Whether or not this was your first or 500th poem, I think you have a gift.