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RE: The Empty House (II)

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

This is a perfect example of what we have been talking about and what you say just up there in the notes.
Bravo!
I love the aspect of vacancy in this piece, in particular the on-high structures of prayer, both places for the living and the dead, of where the sacred is said to dwell. Both shells.
Starkly beautiful!

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Not just vacancy, but absence.

And how's this for poetic prose: Absence has been with me often as of late.

And it is interesting, using a piece on vacancy to speak of how you don't need to embellish things in art.

Glad you liked it, Niish.

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