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RE: Til Morning - Original Poetry
Very powerful opening! Had me curious throughout the entire poem! Well done :)
The monster, from my interpretation, is a metaphor for our mind; the constant clutter of our thoughts which come alive at night. I love the part about eyes meeting, it shows how the tiniest of eye-contacts with this monster can result in very grievous states, both mentally and physically.
Yea, the theme is from a childs point of view, so I tried looking at it from that aspect, but its been a while since I looked at things that way. Glad I was able to capture the message I was hoping for. Thanks for the comment!
:) You're welcome! Indeed you did capture the message perfectly! Keep it up :)