Excellent poem! If failing at keeping someone is something you experience often, perhaps it's best to take a step back and reflect on if it is worth all the energy and effort. Accepting that some things are just not meant to be is key. Well done, and thank you for sharing!
PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too. :)
Thank you for dropping by @lukakorba! Yeah, also, find the one who'd want to be 'kept' and who'd stay. ^_^
You're welcome, it was a nice read! :) Yup, finding that someone is such a blissful feeling! :)