Feelings Behind the Roaring Silence
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Fan rustling,
Fingers writing,
Heart is beating
Yet mind is sinking
Earsplitting silence
What an irony
It doesn't make sense
What a mystery.
Strange feelings,
Suddenly emerging
Spiteful promises
Indisputably demeaning
Bothersome emotion
Took quietude away
Isolating potion
Kept us both at bay
No more silly talks
And fancy chortle
No more idyllic walks
That, I could tell.
Not out of reach
Yet way too far
A sudden breach
from you, my star.
Silence...
That's all what's left
There'll forever be a
barrier in between.
That's what it meant.
But my love,
Behind this burning silence
I only wish you'd hear
My heart's poignant whimper.
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Xoxo, Tomo desu~ <3
you are a good writer..
Thank you @jerryhuge! ^^
Your english is pretty awesome. I wish I had such command on language. and Tomo desu, its your pen name? :D
Thank you for your kind words @artlover. ^^ I'm flattered hahaha XD. I'm glad you liked it. :))
And yeah, tomo desu, shortcut for tomodatchi, which means 'friend' in japanese. ^^ I find Tomo cute so I used it instead of tomodatchi. ^^ Tomo desu means 'I am called Tomo' ^^
Ohh I see, nice name Tomo :D ..friendly, well no doubts about it, you really are a friendly person. :D Good day to you!!
^^ Thank you @artlover. :)) You are a friendly person yourself. :) Have a good day as well! :D
nice poem..keep writing..
Thank youuuuu! ^^
nice poem i love it
Thank youuu @mrblu! ^^
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great poem @littlerph keep posting
Thank you! :)
you are a good writer..
Thank you! ^^