Spoken words and less unspoken

in #poetry3 years ago (edited)

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Spoken words and less unspoken
Feel the need to be awoken
Lights so dark and dim the sun
Do need not dare to me now?!

Angry I be I hate what you say!
Right now we seem lost
At a bay of no display!!!
You are just rough and mean at all points!!

Cant understand why I am still here
My life is my own you are not it
You are my path or will you ever be
Your path is just lost and I can’t be it

I hate loving you and love is what I hate
You mind is a mess and cant keep things straight
I might be a shit in a darkness I live
But you will never receive what I have to give

On step at a time my mind gets much close
To what I can be dragged on my own
Nothingness happens when life hits despair
Solemn behavior is so far aware

Untangling the strings of human imagination
Humble and strong their made in such a fashion
No one can handle a true self conscious
Unless their aware of the true cost of happiness

U are my nemesis a true self righteous spirit
Feeling your breathe against my spirit
Deep and sound my ear is hearing
Your ever called noise beyond hearing

And now I am awake a full entanglement
Of water and earth bind throughout eternal finesse
A mold in a pit of fire burnt no less then a pot of clay in hellish dust

Oh my should I complain ? Its burning me deep
Still I feel no pain..despair has been lost in depths of the mind and what it is left just bad state of mind
Untangle me mind and set me loose
Somehow I will find my righteousness somehow..

Keep in touch,
@lidac

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to release and be released. thoughts spike against the inner skull... i firmly believe in releasing these thoughts. when out on a page we see and know who we are better. thanks for sharing

Yes that is true..when it is out you can confront your spirit easier about who you are and what you have to say..its hard to be the bad doer..so to say... but the bad doer has a lot of pain that needs release..😁

Very powerful prose, @lidac. These lines in particular really caught my ear, so to speak -

I hate loving you and love is what I hate
You mind is a mess and cant keep things straight
I might be a shit in a darkness I live
But you will never receive what I have to give

Excellent rhythm to your words. Well done!

Thank you I appreciate you stopping by..poem was written from a prolonged frustration I seem to have round this time..

I've had SAD (seasonal affective disorder) as well as depression and stuff for many years, so I hear that. Sending you hugs.

Unfortunately for me this type of disorder is not seasonal..thanks

Such a beautiful poem. The emotions are so intense. I love this part

I hate loving you and love is what I hate
You mind is a mess and cant keep things straight
I might be a shit in a darkness I live
But you will never receive what I have to give

Thank you ..yes the reason I wrote it was intense..I guess it somehow transpared into the poem..lovely of you to stop by..and that part was a favorite for me as well..

Lovely poem, the character is complex and interesting. :-)

Thank you and yes the character is very complex and interesting ..

I'm sorry I missed this poem when it was still in the pay-out period, but I wanted to say how dark and beautiful it was. It also makes me want to ask if you're ok? Sending hugs your way!