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RE: D'Lion, Day 45 of the 100 Days of Poetry, @d-pend
You've left me both hungry and smiling from the rhythm haha. I've got loads in my garden and normally just uproot them but might have to think twice now...
I like that there's enjambment between 1st and 2nd stanzas - even if it wasn't intentional, it's like the voice is overflowing with desire to share their numerous virtues :)
Thanks, Lazarus. I pay close attention to how a piece looks on a page and so I use enjambment a lot. Glad you noticed the rhythm. I was trying to get the dandelion rapping:)