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RE: Cup of Tea (Free verse) - Steemit School Poetry 100 Day Challenge - Day 50, Poem 45
Your robust shape
sinking in the bed
It's incredible how on the first read through my eyes just passed over these lines, but reading the whole thing a second time, they then took on intense new meanings. The best poetry always rewards repeated readings! An emotionally charged and well proportioned piece, Marlyn :)
You're too kind, @lazarus-wist. Thanks for the visit and such thoughtful comment :)