You really went all in with the alliteration on this one! The words effortlessly roll off each other, reflecting the ease of the campfire setting. I think it makes a great contrast with the final stanza where you start to drop them and just focus on that image of the old widow longing to be included.
Very nicely done, I can feel the warmth running throughout and it does take me back to some similar family gatherings :)
I usually add punctuation last, just forgot on this piece. Ill edit it now.