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RE: Conkers (poem)

in #poetry6 years ago

Really wonderful Damien, you paint such a vibrant picture. The duality in these lines holds so much weight:

Or made a realisation
we weren't playing
games.

The poetic image of the conker itself is also exceptionally well expressed, lending itself to the subject matter perfectly. Appreciate you sharing this one.

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Thanks Lazarus. Yes, I thought the image of the conker starting to unshell was perfect. Thanks for reading.

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