Criticize my happy birthday poem

Hello steemians, I'm new at poetry. I wrote this for my bff. I wouldn't mind any corrections or suggestions. Kindly proof read my poem.

intend to post this on her Facebook wall.

Hurray! Hurray!! Hurray!!! mark this day
Epsy i into the twilight sky of friends
You are the brightest twinkle i witnessed
her embracing smile, calm as a lake

So kind a soul whose heart pumps love
O her seducing eyes, tames any beast
No anchor can drown you in this sea
Choirs chronicle her in the heavens above

Her glistening rivers of smiles flow eternal,
Refelcting the radiance of dancing stars
In thier crystal dome, a choir with the sun
She smolders not, her tears whisper it all

Racing down her cheeks to distant lands
I remember this November is due
MAY parades of joyful winds MARCH to you.
Worthy of love, her warming Hands

I wish to write till my pen slumps and dies,
But has failed me not, hence i must stop
A greet you in love; pleasant morning
My charming friend BELKA MAUREEN,

Oh, almost forgot to jot this down
Beautiful in the past. Yes! Wow!
Beautiful in future, SHOUT OUT!
Most importantly, CALM DOWN!
Cuz you're BEAUTIFUL TODAY and NOW.

Dont forget to UPVOTE AND FOLLOW @KKINS