THE CRYING MAN
Every word was a cry
As he begged to make her his
But his pleas were falling on deaf ears
He knelt before her with trace of tears
As though she was a supreme being
Terrified and trembling with fear
But her mind was set on leaving
Silently he called for help
With his eyes fixed to the sky feeling like a whelp
Please don’t do this!
The only words he could say
Like death life was vain
What’s life without love
As he broke down in pool of tears
So sad, the thought of losing the ones we love could be very painful.
Nice piece.
thanks.
I think although the man feels life is nothing without love, the love for himself and his love for life will carry him through!
Ever loved someone so much that you forget about yourself totally? To an extent that you just give the person your life and expect him or her not to hurt you?
Yes, and I was a crying woman as he walked away also, so i know this pain, and I know that loving myself more after the pain is what carried me through!
Good advice. I am sure every crying man or woman who sees this can learn to deal with this.
Nice job with this poem, @kenneth1! I am hoping you are not the man with the broken heart.
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Lol! Inspirations can come from anywhere when one is writing a poem... Is it me? I am hoping its not me. lol
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