A Better Tomorrow (An Original Poem)

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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We had the chance to make a beautiful tomorrow
But our union only brought each other sorrow
The desire was to dance in love in a passionate rain
But we were left bleeding with hurt and pain

What was once meant to be eternal is now ending
But the new year brings promises of a new beginning
As we relive old moments and prepare to move on
I only wish we'd been stronger to ride out this storm

Some love is forever, some never meant to be
You just know when it's time to set yourself free
While life is a teacher, time is our savior and healer
As a chapter ends, the hope remains for something better


Life is an exquisite, elaborate and mysterious adventure with both ups and downs. It is filled with moments of light and memories of darkness, we experience the warmth of companionship and the cold of loneliness. The journey of life would be incomplete without this pain, hurt and all the negative emotions that leaves us bleeding and questioning our existence. In the end, we only grow stronger from the suffering, and as we handle all the damage and recover from the loss, it shows us who we truly are and we get to discover our true inner potential. As we move on towards a new day and a new future, the scar reminds us of our past, yet it is also a sign that the wound has healed. We always deserve better - a better tomorrow, a better life, and we owe it to ourselves to find it!

Thank you for reading!

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Wonderful poem buddy. Loved reading. Wish u a bright and successful 2018. Regards Nainaz.
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Thank you very much, wish u much success and happiness in the new year too...

Very true!! I simply love your poetry!! @jznsamuel Sir..

Thank you very much ma'am :)

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True and beautiful words! Pain makes us stronger and wiser. Life is in our hand. It depends in us how do we shape it.

That's a good preservative! Thanks :)

What a beautiful poem!
you're so gifted @jznsamuel! thanks for your help last time!
I wish you a great 2018!
Keep up the good work

Thank you, appreciate the nice comment :)

It's simply beautiful!

Thank you, and happy new year!

Happy New Year to you too! May all your wishes are fulfilled this year :-)

So touching poem, beautifully written.

Very beautiful and meaningful lyrics.

Awesome poem. I love it

Youre welcome..

That one touched me right in the feels. Awesome poem cheers.

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