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RE: Everybody has a poem #2 : My Own Doom
I am my own doom
Cause even after escaping from the womb
I refuse to stand on my foot
So I've remained in a room
I am my own doom
Cause even after escaping from the womb
I refuse to stand on my foot
So I've remained in a room
HHmmmn... I smell self-inflicted stagnancy... You're perhaps talking a little about laziness.. refusal to grow up or irresponsibility.. I just cant quite lay my hands on the subject matter though but this was a great write.. Your poetry keeps improving and yes, I loved the rhymes
I don't get
Are you referring to Uncle Prechi or Me?
I am referring to you na.. I dropped the comment as a reply to your own comment
Find the will and stand up o.
If not, you'll really become your own doom
The will...
Let me go and find it 🏃 🏃 🏃
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