RE: ADSactly Poetry -Inner Strength, Inner Power and Endurement
The poems are really amazing, I could tell that every line come from the heart because the message of the poem spears through my heart. Very well made and I know sir @jeronimorubio spent not just hours, nor mind but also his soul to the poems. I am so blessed and I salute you so much sir @jeronimorubio.
After reading the first poem "Soldier" I was reminded of our veterans who fought in the war to protect us civilians. Being in the war is not a joke or a fantasy. I have seen movies after movies and documentaries about wars and I could feel in my heart the life of a SOLDIER is not easy, everyday their life is at stake, every single of good moments are seize because they don't know if they are still alive in a minute or two. Fear is eating every glimpse of hope they have to come home.
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It takes a lot of courage to stand up and fight at the very start of the day. So your poem is an encouragement in what they needed the most.
I also see myself at the second poem "Within". I know that everyone is a light to someone, an encouragement and a model. I know that something is great within me, that is needed to unlock. That is why I like the tag line of NIKE "Just do it" because I know I have the capabilities to do what I want and to make it happen. It just that fear is holding me down.
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The hardest part is to take that "First Step" to achieving a dream and your poem "Within" just nailed what everyone needed most to be encouraged to start making our dreams happen. Believing in ourselves is the key to make that first step to success.
I am also encouraged with the poem "Endure". It is like "Believing in your self" is the fuel and "Enduring" is the engine to reach one's dream. I remember a line from a book i had read "Champions are not made in the ring, they are made in the training".
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Yeah right! How they endure all the intesive trainings, they are champions already. The weather may be gloomy but "endurance" will make it bright as day.
Thank you @jeronimorubio for making these encouraging poems. I am always inpired by @adsactly.
Godspeed.
Thank you so much for all your amazing words and the way you described the poetry as it's meaning to you. I really like your analogy of each poem. Very well put. Very well done indeed. Godspeed to you as well and always Have a blessed day.