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RE: Depression Reality - A Poem

in #poetry6 years ago

when you give out, and giving sure is a hopeful word

Ah, but giving is not hopeful at all when you "give out" like an old tire or an aged back. I love this contrast.

What do you do,
when you run out of words,
but not out of pain.

And this. I haven't had to find out yet and I hope I never do.

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Giving is not hopeful.

It's not just "giving out," but also "giving in" and "giving up," it's interesting that a word such as giving, when it comes to idioms, is all about hopelessness. Shows what people in our society really think of giving, eh?

And oh, Jess, I hope you never do find out.

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