@mamadini this poem makes me breathless as i read my heart races along the stanzas, the imagery and symbols in your words in my brain, channeling through my blood and body. I woke up dreaming of you this morning, nearly overwhelmed by the emotions i was having. For me personally, this work is powerfully realized with intensity and passion.
The power of poetry is intense. I love your feedback, JP, you always bring in the right-brain vibes that I so undestand.
Thank you. :)